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Thin blade held in my grasp
My enemy so very close
In my insanity I could

Drive this very blade through his very heart
It would bring great satisfaction
Seeing him try to find his last breathe

As his body gives in
And his warm blood covering my hands
Or I could finish him quick

This would get such a great treat
Imagining and finding out how strong I am
So many choices which to choose

I also have learned how sick and twisted
My mind can be
And how creative in the process

Can I go through with this?
Or crumble like the coward
He believes I am

I can feel my heart now
I must make a choice
Weather or not to please my sick mind

Or for once in my life be compassionate
For a fellows man life

So many toughts passing threw my head
I made my choice
.I will let him
..
...
.....
......Die
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:giggle: Fun! I like the feel of it. :)

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And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
its great!! good feel and rythmn!

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In my own salvation
And your eternal slumber
Legend shall speak
Of sacrifice at world’s end
The wind sails over the water’s surface
Quietly, but surely
~ Loveless


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Fate has delt me a cruel hand but alas I was alone to begin with
ty amaya i work very hard on it

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very powerful :wow:

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We are here together we do stuff together :w00t:

And a membie of *Writers-Club=RawEm0tion~PoetsClub

Fate has delt me a cruel hand but alas I was alone to begin with
it's kool :D

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny
thanks^^

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We are here together we do stuff together :w00t:

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Fate has delt me a cruel hand but alas I was alone to begin with

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